Death waited for them beyond the veil of smoke.
The wind shifted, Briar dug in his heels, and his horse charged deeper into the burning woods.
It was neither bravery nor desire on his part; he'd never been accused of having much of the former, and the latter he reserved for carnal delights. Anticipation pushed him between the smoldering trees and into the clearing moments before a comet crossed behind him, spooking his horse.
The prince pushed up from the ground just enough to spit out dirt and watched with awe the ring of fire chasing a flurry of leaves along the tree line.
He followed the flame until his eye fell on Shannen standing with her arms outstretched, eyes cast skyward, balanced upon the village well in the eye of the storm.
Please check out the other talented writers participating in this week's Six Sentence Sunday. These are some of my favorites: Sarah Ballance, Krystal Wade, Monica Enderle Pierce, Siobhan Muir, Sarah W., Pippa Jay, Kelly Seguin, and Steven Montano.
I can't see this ending well for the prince. But still very entertaining to read.
ReplyDeleteWhenever men are sent on a routine, boring, punishment detail, they will find something and it won't be kittens and puppies . ..
ReplyDeleteGreat six! :)
You always have such a powerfully descriptive 6 and this was no exception! Very exciting and draws you in! Awesome 6!
ReplyDeleteAmazing imagery! Well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat description! Sounds like the village is about to meet its end.
ReplyDeleteI do not intend to sound like a broken record, however, your imagery is staggering! Where can I buy this book? I'm with L.J. and Dee! Sincerely Wendy, I wish I had a quarter of your ability to capture images.
ReplyDeleteAwesome Six!
Thank you, everyone! As for where you can buy it...it's actually a shelved novel, though I am tossing around the idea of submitting it, after another round of editing.
ReplyDeleteYour imagery just keeps getting better and better. That first line is a killer!
ReplyDeleteLove the tone and the description - the comet was unexpected - so much happening. Really gets the Reader involved. Great six!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully envisioned and vividly written. Your prose is exceptional and immediately puts your reader into the heart of the scene. So well done, Wendy. Bravo!!!
ReplyDeleteWhat an engaging blend of imagery and inner thoughts. Please do edit and submit this for publication. I'll line up to buy it!
ReplyDelete--Kimberly K. Comeau
Captured me. Love this!
ReplyDeleteFantastic atmosphere! That first line is awesome!
ReplyDeleteAs everyone one else stated... awesome imagery! Great Six!
ReplyDeleteAmazing imagery. Very well done!
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery, powerful scene! Nice six, Wendy :-)
ReplyDeleteWow, spooky six. Sounds like a fun tale, Wendy. Thanks so much for the mention. :)
ReplyDeleteSiobhan
Amazing writing! Beautiful, vivid, powerful ... I second and third and fourth+ all of those compliments!
ReplyDeleteI love the images you conjured up in my mind while reading this. I love death lore, so your opening line for this six sent shivers of pleasure racing down my spine. Well done!
ReplyDeleteFire AND a ground-level comet? No wonder the horse spooked!
ReplyDeleteLove the end. Vivid, eerie description and you counted it so well with the reality of the less-than-heroic hero. Nice six, Wendy!
ReplyDeleteGreat imagery Wendy!
ReplyDeleteYou may get tired of me praising your descriptions, Wendy, but I'm going to keep doing it, because the imagery and detail in your Six Sunday snippets keep getting better and better!
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