These 7 sentences are numbers 7-11 of page 77 of a shelved novel.
“What else happened,” Nataju asked, caressing his wife's arm. Her tattoo healed faster than his. All her injuries did.
“Siilan…” she said with a heavy exhale.
“…the hopeless wonder?...”
“Not so much," Jiade's lilt pierced through her sadness. "Briar’s daughter adores him.”
My beta readers have enjoyed it. Maybe I'll dust it off and submit it somewhere.
Ok. Now I get to pick seven lucky people!
- Ciara Knight
- Kinley Baker
- Sasha Summers
- Kate Evangelista
- Aaron Michael Ritchey
- Sarah W.
- Monica Enderle Pierce
Again, here are the "rules." Go to page 77 of your WIP (or something else you've written), find sentences 7-11. Post. Tag 7 more people. Feel free to cheat.
I want to know why she heals so fast!
ReplyDeleteJiade's an immortal her people call a "Virgin Knight." There hasn't been one among them in long enough that they became myths, until she was born. Anyhow, she can be injured but she heals quicker than normal. (An aside...the celibacy isn't a choice. Her immortality is tied to it.)
DeleteNice passage, Wendy -- it's brief, but intriguing!
ReplyDeleteAnd thanks for the tag -- two people got me last month on the same day, so I did both my WIPS in one post: http://wessonblog.wordpress.com/2012/03/23/lucky-seven-times-two/
(if you would rather I didn't post a link here, just delete this comment -- but thanks for thinking of me!)