tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post8358377985408853712..comments2023-04-07T10:06:27.330-05:00Comments on Wendy S. Russo: Six Sentence Sunday - Shelved WIP #2Wendyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00299146463845558413noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-87010750685068454322011-12-19T09:40:27.644-06:002011-12-19T09:40:27.644-06:00Wow, I can feel the anger sparking off that six. (...Wow, I can feel the anger sparking off that six. (and thanks for the inclusion of the non-blushworthy list, lol).Pippa Jayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15146591827060731958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-20656998502991701922011-12-19T06:52:53.525-06:002011-12-19T06:52:53.525-06:00I love the last lineI love the last lineJayel Kayehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16895398236919824214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-49875455342216633242011-12-18T19:51:44.830-06:002011-12-18T19:51:44.830-06:00Thanks Angela. I added Stephanie to the list.Thanks Angela. I added Stephanie to the list.Wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00299146463845558413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-72786530660079742502011-12-18T19:28:32.343-06:002011-12-18T19:28:32.343-06:00Great scene, lots of pent-up anger coming to the f...Great scene, lots of pent-up anger coming to the fore. And thanks for adding me to your list :)<br /><br />Another one is Stephanie Lawton who writes YA: http://stephanielawton.com/2011/12/18/six-sentence-sunday-breaking-a-kid-in-surrender/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-28037786603948836562011-12-18T16:32:16.547-06:002011-12-18T16:32:16.547-06:00Makes me want to know why their son ran off. Great...Makes me want to know why their son ran off. Great six.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-15012822095677254962011-12-18T13:03:37.742-06:002011-12-18T13:03:37.742-06:00Oh, why was this shelved?
Think about meringue fo...Oh, why was this shelved?<br /><br />Think about meringue for a moment. You have egg whites. You add some cream of tartar. You whip them until until they have these lovely white peaks. And if you keep whipping them, they seize up into a white mass floating in water.<br /><br />That's what I did to this WIP. I plan on doing something with the chapter this came from, maybe building something new.<br /><br />Thanks everyone for commenting. I love that you like it. :)Wendyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00299146463845558413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-35967222563721687602011-12-18T12:56:40.492-06:002011-12-18T12:56:40.492-06:00Wow---these passages are intense and the hints of ...Wow---these passages are intense and the hints of world-building are intriguing.<br /><br />Why was this shelved? I'd like to read it.Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-66445419294315255282011-12-18T11:54:41.669-06:002011-12-18T11:54:41.669-06:00Amazing intensity! This guy had better find his ki...Amazing intensity! This guy had better find his kid!Jessica Knausshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07049731983377756203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-56910612331295812292011-12-18T10:36:49.238-06:002011-12-18T10:36:49.238-06:00Whoa, that's a helluva ultimatum. Well done si...Whoa, that's a helluva ultimatum. Well done six, Wendy. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-7137919218370974192011-12-18T10:35:16.194-06:002011-12-18T10:35:16.194-06:00Absolutely fantastic emotion in this. I am loving ...Absolutely fantastic emotion in this. I am loving her!Joanne Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708364499624604625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-74360527664622300512011-12-18T05:39:55.565-06:002011-12-18T05:39:55.565-06:00WOW. Fantastic scene. Thank you for sharing your w...WOW. Fantastic scene. Thank you for sharing your wonderful work. I hope you have a glorious Christmas. AxAlixhttp://romancingalix.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.com