tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post7326092162118995364..comments2023-04-07T10:06:27.330-05:00Comments on Wendy S. Russo: #SixSunday: Virgo (WIP)-Dance Club Scene #2Wendyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00299146463845558413noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-81106828454883175902012-01-31T07:16:55.142-06:002012-01-31T07:16:55.142-06:00Excellent work, Wendy--love the insight into this ...Excellent work, Wendy--love the insight into this world I know next to nothing about (all right, nothing). The tension builds steadily, and the setting for both character and scene is done with very few words, yet it comes through and flaps wings, alive. Great job, and thanks for sharing!Guilie Castillohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09006999087139126972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-90188283008210564352012-01-29T23:01:33.728-06:002012-01-29T23:01:33.728-06:00This pacing in this is terrific. Makes me tense wi...This pacing in this is terrific. Makes me tense with her, yet I can feel the hum of the scene. Nice!Monica Enderle Piercehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08906580310155422359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-34067606932922742242012-01-29T18:53:11.308-06:002012-01-29T18:53:11.308-06:00First of all, I am totally honored to have made yo...First of all, I am totally honored to have made your list. Thank you! Second, I love your set-up here. I'd love to know what made her stop smiling at the end, and the line about the flight was funny! ;c)Sarah Ballancehttp://sarahballance.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-1822092076927171222012-01-29T17:24:55.496-06:002012-01-29T17:24:55.496-06:00Interesting six! I enjoyed how you set the scene a...Interesting six! I enjoyed how you set the scene and it left me wanting more.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04357850791676886486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-11932392428660945132012-01-29T16:02:49.607-06:002012-01-29T16:02:49.607-06:00I like the picture you painted of the rave. I can...I like the picture you painted of the rave. I can definitely relate to a flight turning much longer, after a surprise middle of the night landing in Vienna when an elderly passenger got sick on our way back home!Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-84098962757002432902012-01-29T15:49:39.746-06:002012-01-29T15:49:39.746-06:00Fantastic, authentic world-building. Great job!Fantastic, authentic world-building. Great job!Vivien Deanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15510934097238428891noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-31033295948956635462012-01-29T14:56:00.629-06:002012-01-29T14:56:00.629-06:00Generation gap here, too-but I can definitely conn...Generation gap here, too-but I can definitely connect with the security incident!Sue Ann Bowlinghttp://homecomingbook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-20056391545176436712012-01-29T14:55:37.759-06:002012-01-29T14:55:37.759-06:00Great insight into her character. I got a little l...Great insight into her character. I got a little lost at first too, had to read it a few times to get what was happening. I definitely wanted to be able to read more. A great snippet.Joanne Stewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17708364499624604625noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-63794990890875785172012-01-29T14:29:36.504-06:002012-01-29T14:29:36.504-06:00Like Stephanie, I got a little lost in the pronoun...Like Stephanie, I got a little lost in the pronouns. But the snippet definitely left me interested in this situation and how it's going to play out. I'll follow along from now on.Patricia Greenhttp://www.patriciagreenbooks.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-38506218419720132212012-01-29T14:25:21.110-06:002012-01-29T14:25:21.110-06:00Great six! The scene is set so vividly!
Amy Durham...Great six! The scene is set so vividly!<br /><a href="http://amy-durham.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Amy Durham</a>Kelly's Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02670823346986342594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-59394221301059975542012-01-29T14:08:49.948-06:002012-01-29T14:08:49.948-06:00Wow, I learned a lot in six sentences! I'm an...Wow, I learned a lot in six sentences! I'm an old fart though and we never had them fancy 7 n 7's or flash raves in my day. LOLClaire Gillianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08389410834599445845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-77524090645672712982012-01-29T13:55:58.630-06:002012-01-29T13:55:58.630-06:00I'm a little confused by some of the pronouns ...I'm a little confused by some of the pronouns (probably because we were dropped into a scene). But you handle the lingo really well and you're doing a great job of setting up the scene. (Where did she go? Why?)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-63444774047892068892012-01-29T10:36:59.477-06:002012-01-29T10:36:59.477-06:00Great glimpse into a world I know next to nothing ...Great glimpse into a world I know next to nothing about, intriguing!Angela Quarleshttp://www.angelaquarles.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-79285871008674868392012-01-29T09:06:47.895-06:002012-01-29T09:06:47.895-06:00This is deep. Delilah has a lot of thought going o...This is deep. Delilah has a lot of thought going on here. Sounds like you have a really well developed story here. :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11805206329378779413noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-40057315922899283172012-01-29T07:24:57.884-06:002012-01-29T07:24:57.884-06:00Love the lingo and I'm still intrigued with De...Love the lingo and I'm still intrigued with Delilah -- I want to know exactly what she can do . . .Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2732510341498217192.post-81961514409273604312012-01-29T06:02:50.419-06:002012-01-29T06:02:50.419-06:00Ohh I want to read more. Great snippet.Ohh I want to read more. Great snippet.Alix Cameronhttp://romancingalix.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com